The Second Apocalypse

Miscellaneous Chatter => Writing => Topic started by: Callan S. on June 18, 2013, 10:38:17 am

Title: Short writing experiment
Post by: Callan S. on June 18, 2013, 10:38:17 am
I'm just trying some patterns and thought I'd test here - probably the real test will be to repeat the pattern. But I thought I'd start here, get things rolling.

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The lost rune of Umbrica - said to open the Stanshion gates to the inner depths plane. Simple enough to make a perilous journey, navigate ancient traps in a twisting maze and nab it...if a mad old sniper circling in a blimp above the runes open pedistal room wasn't pinning you down behind stone block covered with depictions of - to be honest, I'm not sure what those figures are doing? The stone near my head explodes with the sound of a richocheting bullet! He must have circled around - it's hard to tell without sticking your head out. The temptation is to look. Old, old instincts, all luring you to the not so good idea, given a musket weilding maniac hovers fifty feet above!