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Three Roses, Bk.1 by Roger Eichorn
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--- Quote from: delavagus ---Thanks, Madness! (What's your name, again? Mike? My memory for names is terrible...)
BTW, I had no idea my maps would post at their full size. I figured the site would make thumbnails out of them. Do you think I should get rid of them? Or shrink them? They make this page rather unwieldy...
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--- Quote from: Madness ---Yeap, that'd be me. Not so terrible.
Hmm... I took the time to explore them. It is only this one page that will be stretched like this within the thread.
I leave it up to those who are reading this thread at all. I don't mind.
Still not the coherency I'd like but some thoughts:
Really like the conception of Kosmos Biblioth, the Kosmokinoi, worldwalkers, the different Orders. Contzen was awesome.
I could read the prologue especially but any sidereas at all, over and over again.
I really appreciate the idea of world-slips, certain individuals being instrumental in using those moments as fulcrums against the Opponent, and the psychological integration that takes.
Late night for me tonight and early morning tomorrow but you've had me exploring your world all day in my mind. Something to be said for that.
Cheers.
String theory a big inspiration?
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--- Quote from: Callan S. ---I've only read part so far (I just don't enjoy reading for pleasure from a computer screen, though I can read forums all day)
Just so far; I'm not sure how much weight you put on opening lines, but to me the first line didn't have a mystery in it. To me, you could tie that sorcerer in, like how it says the monastary is surrounded by fog, you could also add 'and inside it, a fog surrounded by a man. A sorcerer.' or something.
During the game, I think something should be at stake. Yes, maybe I don't know about the thing that is at stake during it and that's revealed latter - but for us clompers, perhaps something of concerning and fairly obvious nature could also be happening in the background, that the player aught deal with?
Am looking forward to this thread getting to the second page - the images are making the posting box unpleasant to work with.
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--- Quote from: Madness ---I just took a gander at editing your post, Delavagus. There's some kind of image portal beneath the text window where you can click text to upload images specifically.
I'm not sure if that will change how these are displayed. The way they're imbedded weirds me out too.
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--- Quote from: delavagus ---I just got rid of the maps. I could shrink them and repost if anyone's interested. Let me know.
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