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The Long Held Breath

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Garet Jax:
I thought it was more about being the bully and the ego it creates.

Good short though.

SilentRoamer:
“Bease!” he cried through snot and cramp and fire. “Bease! Leave me alone!“

This is naked Bakker. It is such a powerful sentence; snot and cramp and fire are just so evocative, coupled with the distortion of speech this paints a fantasticly vivid scene for me. This could have come out of the mouth of any Inchie/Sranc/Cnaiur prisoner.

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