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« on: November 03, 2013, 07:19:53 am »
I haven't read through all of Locke's post just yet, but I have to disagree and offer some quick counter points as I have daydreamed and plotted about a visual representation of PoN.
The fragmentation Locke speaks of is more so because he is leaving out significant scenes, and adding emphasis to small scenes that shouldn't be given as much credit. For instance, Kellhus' opening scene in the wilderness. Although not immensely necessary and could be done via montage, you skip over the entire Leweth scene. I'm sorry, but Kellhus and Leweth cannot be done in 45 seconds nor should it. The scene is incredibly fundamental to the character and the story as a whole. And lets not forget you have a perfect cliffhanger ending at the end of TDTCB. The end of the book is NOT the meet and greet with the Emperor, the end of the book is Achamian finding out the Consult are alive and infiltrated House Ikurei!! On top of that he ignores Esmi at the end too. I think that makes for a great season ending episode...Walks past Esmi, not acknowledging her, pan way out and show the Holy War marching to war.
As for an example of adding unnecessary emphasis to scenes that don't require them. Achamian in Carythusal. This is a scene that could be brushed aside in a very brief amount of time because it's not important. What is important about the scene is it sets up Achamian to be summoned back home so we can get a glimpse inside the school and of how Achamian is already doubting his own conviction. It also gives an opportunity to learn about the Chorae, which is absolutely necessary, and to see our hidden, overarching villain later on albeit only very very briefly.
I will say that it would be difficult hopping around from character to character when they are so spaced at the beginning, but that is the point. TDTCB is all about the beginnings of something monumental. It is the coming together of these characters and somehow representing that visually would be necessary, but it's entirely possible.
PoN is setup quite well for episodic viewing and seasons. I think each book has a significant role or theme -
TDTCB = the coming together - a beginning of great things - an enemy revealed
TWP = The march - and the beginning of the transformation of Kellhus to Aspect-Emperor/God
TTT = the culmination of things - the end of the march - ascension of Kellhus to Godhood and Akka renouncing him
Just my two cents so far, hopefully it doesn't sound too critical.