Here are my corrections so far.  May have a couple of duplicates with prior posters.  Only have about 50 more pages to go...

p.53  “what most irks you most” -  2nd paragraph from top - to
p.60  “…soul when she leapt (slept).” – Last paragraph
p.74  “…he glimpse(d) white wings…” – Paragraph beginning with “A Silence…”
p. 83  “…as much as too (to) his feet,…” -  Paragraph beginning with “Yes,” the man replied…”
P. 114  “…a kind (of) black moss…” – 1st paragraph
p. 172  “(The) Padirajah finally whirled…” – 3rd line from top
p. 221  “Mimara…he says as if she (he) were her tutor…” – 3rd line from top
p. 221  “…rudiments of sowing (sewing)…” – Last paragraph
p. 235  “…none of these are here (her) own…” – 7th line from top
p. 322  “…tell me if you were you to find your father’s shade…”  - Paragraph beginning with “Tell me manling…”
p. 329  “…the realization the (that) she had failed…” – 9th line up from bottom
p. 330 “…and saw one (of) the Tall…” – Middle of page
p.  352  “…surged as one glittering sheet toward their their foe…” – 3rd line from bottom
p. 386 “…and the monitor happened upon a wane (wan) flare of solace…” - 9th line from top
p. 389 “…a great contest was about to (be) waged.” – 4th line from bottom
P 407  “…and he yet he…” – 2nd paragraph
p. 431 “…as surely as it did on the Malowebi’s own…” – 3rd paragraph

p. 320 ARC...

Lord Harapior:  "But then I know you are Dunyain...I know that every blunted edge you bare conceals a poison pin." 

"I was a fool for thinking that knowledge would make me your master...So now I'm suspicious beyond all reason.  I obsess, wondering where I might find the poison pin.  And I ask, What will my King do when he at last lays eyes on you?  What would any soul do when presented a famed songbird as a gift?"  He sneered.

"Of course, he would bid it sing."  He seized her head , jammed the silken sack deep into her mouth and throat.  She gagged and convulsed as someone human might.  His eyes gleamed for satisfaction.

"No voice," he said "No poison pin."

p. 329 The ARC

Serwa:  And it descended as lightning, the realization that she had failed.  Harapior had guessed her gambit.  Very soon, they would become the plaything of some decrepit and inhuman will , something to sin against and so purchase some brief term of sanity.

Have a bunch of typos, wordos etc...  Nearing completion of my second read through will have correction posted by Thursday.  Hope that works.

Yup.

Yeah, that's me with the bid.  After reading those excerpts I've decided I can't wait until July. 

Love the writing and I'm anxiously looking forward to July 7th!

Anyone have any insight into the section that begins with the following:

"There is a head on a pole behind you.

Brutalities spin and scrape, like leaves blasted in the wind.

He is here ... with you ... not so much inside me as speaking with your voice.There is a head on a pole behind you."

Unless I'm completely misreading this I'm assuming this is written from Kellhus' point of view based upon his experience in the Outside. 

"He comes to the shore that is here, always here, gazes without sight across waters that are fire, and sees the Sons swimming, lolling and bloated and bestial, raising babes as wineskins, and drinking deep their shrieks.

There is a head on a pole behind you.

And he sees that these things are meat, here. Love is meat. Hope is meat. Courage. Outrage. Anguish. All these things are meat—seared over fire, sucked clean of grease.

There is a head on a pole.

Taste, one of the Sons says to him. Drink.

It draws down its bladed fingers, and combs the babe apart, plucking him into his infinite strings, laying bare his every inside, so that it might lick his wrack and wretchedness like honey from hair. Consume ... And he sees them descending as locusts, the Sons, drawn by the lure of his meat.

There is a head ... and it cannot be moved."

Several times in this passage RSB uses the phrase "There is a head..."  I've read through the section a couple times trying to glean the significance of this phrase or imagery but I'm coming up short.  Anyone have any insight or speculation as to the significance of this phrase?

Wilshire,

Make sure you post a photo of the completed product.  I'm anxiously awaiting the big reveal and want to see what the heat branding looks like.  If it comes out looking good I think I may be placing an order!  Thanks for sharing this!

Great work Som,

I'm the person who sent you the e-mails via Deviant Art commenting on your skills and asking if you sell any of your stuff.  Again, love the new stuff.  Keep up the good work!