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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 5
« on: May 09, 2018, 07:01:18 pm »
I think Xerias appears to be far less than he is, actually. Its kind of a complex thing, but he demands everyone think he is strong, which makes him appear weak and overbearing. In reality though, he proves himself to be extremely shrewd, though the way things are written makes it seem like a double-bluff, making the reader want to prescribe his accomplishments as happenstance and luck.

He's certainly intelligent and perceptive.  That's clear from his POV in this chapter.  He seems pretty insecure, which probably taints our perceptions of him, and we are getting his thoughts rather than other peoples.

The Ikurei (or at least Xerias and Conphas) are extremely strong contenders in Earwa, and knowing what they are up against makes them all the more impressive. If not for the Dunyain, Xerias and Conphas would have come very nearly to completing the first part of the Thousandfold Thought, uniting humanity under one banner and religion. The two of them might actually have done if in less time, given that they didn't have to forcefully conquer and convert the entire world to a new religion, merely half, and both halves were already poised to be on their side.

Not sure about this one.  The Holy War is a Dunyain conditioned event, as we later find out.  Neither Xerius nor Conphas would have been in any position to do anything without Moenghus and Maithanet setting it up, and it would surely have failed without Kellhus.

More generally, I can see alot of parallels between Xerius and Conphas in PON, with Kellhus in TAE.  Men who think they are gods trying to rule the world, and ultimately failing spectacularly at the end.

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 5
« on: May 08, 2018, 07:12:38 pm »
Part 2 of the book = new characters. 
It seems to me there is a contrast between the rather self-serving and self-interested realpolitik of Xerius (and Skauras), and the far more altruistic aims of Achamian and Inrau in the previous section.

We learn that human sacrifice is a thing - victims are burnt in the Cmiral when Calmemunis arrives in Momemn.  The Nansur at least also seem to be quite heavily into the reading of omens and astrology.  Fantasy Christendom this is not - despite the analogues to the Pope, the Bible and the Crusades and suggested in Part 1.  Clever and subtle world building - one of the great strengths of PON

Xerius seems a slightly pathetic figure.  He is addressed as 'god-of-men', and describes himself as "the face of one divine emperor" in order to try and claim the various provinces of Kian for himself.  He is of course not divine, and looks ludicrous given the existence of the Holy War, and religious element in Sumna which we have seen in Part 1.  No-one looks him in the eye and therefore he doesn't know any of them - quite sad.  His own mother very evidently prefers her grandson to her son.  His chief advisors show so little respect that they start bickering amongst themeselves in front of the Kianene envoy.  His imperial intelligence is shown to be lacking when Skauras reveals to him that Maithanet has enlisted the Scarlet Spires.

In this chapter he gets shitted on by what he says are his own birds.  We have of course seen a 'bird' at the end of Part 1, and we know from later in their series that the Consult are very deeply entrenched in the highest levels of the Nansurium.  There is nothing as yet to imply the presence of skin-spies.  Are the Nansur being manipulated, and by whom?  Skeaos and Cememketri seme to think that the Nansur own, or can posses the Holy War, which is an interesting pointer to later events, in both the delusions of the Ikurei and the fact that someone does indeed end up possessing the Holy War.

Xerius as a character, seems to reflect the status of his Empire quite nicely.  The Empire is far less important than its leaders might think, and is under the clear threat of being wiped out by its enemies north and south, with Maithanet as a further factor whose interests are not necessarily aligned with those of the Ikurei.

We learn of the Scylvendi as the People of War - some sort of unvanquishable horde, who will inevitably ride into town and cause havok.  The very fact that Xerius has sent an army north to fight them, seems doomed to failure in the eyes of both Istriya and Skauras.

We also get some reinforcement of what we start to learn in Part 1.  People are shit-scared of the Cishaurim.
And so Mallahet turns up. He is the number two Cishaurim, and it strongly implied that he would be number one if he were of the right ethnicity.  He is described as shockingly pale, and Xerius recollects that he is said have arms scarred like a Scylvendi. 
From various things we learn in subsequent chapters, this is essentially a big flashing sign telling us who Mallahet actually is, and as we know that Maithanet is 'pale as a Norsirai' and arrived from Kian himself, also gives some pointers as to what the new Shriah is all about.  However, as far as I can remember, Mallahet is barely mentioned after this chapter, and hence this clearly very powerful actor falls out of our minds - I know I didn't pick upon on who he was until the in-text reveal.

Closing point from Xerius "everything now hinged on his nephew far to the north".  Who is Conphas and what is he doing?

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 4
« on: May 05, 2018, 08:11:34 pm »
That's a pretty good call.  And seems better than Inrau actually finding info about Maithanet.

Really sorry if I led you to believe something that isn't actually there in the text, like I told H above, I might have been misremembering.

You haven't mislead me and you don't have to apologise for anything. :)

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 4
« on: May 04, 2018, 07:11:25 pm »
I genuinely have never picked up on this before. :(  Whatever he did find, he gave his life to prevent the Consult getting hold of it.

I think that the general consensus is that there was something he found and he's not just thinking of Maithanet likely not being what he seems. Unless I'm having a "Mandela effect" moment here like DoraVee did in the previous chapter...
He certainly did. :(

There isn't any direct implication that he found anything though...it certainly only seems, by what is said, that he arrives at the Temple and make no mention of having been anywhere else.

I think the "final revelation" is that Maithanet, at the very least, is not quite what he seems, which is devesating to Inrau because he had absolute faith in him.  The thing that the Mandate taught him, that he wishes he could forget, is doubt.  What confuses the scene, of course, is the building up on the possibility of Maithanet's Consult allegiance.  So, the scene is deliberately vague to build the idea that the Consult is behind it all.  That is only ratified by the end of the scene with Aurang attempting to interrogate him.  But, we know full well there is no Consult involvement, we know Inrau didn't really know anything more than what he learned from Akka.

Inrau dies to not expose what he knew about Akka.  That's why he repeats "any price" before jumping, earlier he says that what Akka did, in allowing him out of the Mandate was worth "any price."  Dying was his repayment to Akka, knowing that Aurang would get the information out of him somehow if he didn't.

That's a pretty good call.  And seems better than Inrau actually finding info about Maithanet.

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 4
« on: May 03, 2018, 08:06:30 pm »
The head on a pole makes an appearance here, in the form of the goddess Onkis.  What she is the goddess of, we do not learn.  Note the use of the specific phrase "she came before him" - as the place where his thoughts arise

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 4
« on: May 03, 2018, 08:04:15 pm »
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Inrau lowered his face, tried to grimace away his weeping. If only he could forget. If only . . .
The Shriah. But how could it be?
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Please! Let me forget this!
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If he could only have forgotten . . . forgotten what the Mandate had taught him. If he could've done that, then this last heartbreaking revelation would have been meaningless to him. If only Achamian had not come. The price was too high.

Okay, so this is where I am a little confused. I remember it being mentioned in earlier discussions that this points to Inrau having found something incriminating in Maithanet's apartments, right? (The first time I read this, it didn't even register.) I suppose it's not just the fact that Akka and Esmenet have pointed out to him that there is something suspicious going on with Maithanet.

I genuinely have never picked up on this before. :(  Whatever he did find, he gave his life to prevent the Consult getting hold of it.

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB Chapter 4
« on: May 02, 2018, 08:04:57 pm »
So, the end of Part One of Book One, which ends with a mini-resolution. The Consult do exist, and they are in Sumna.

Maithanet has some way of knowing that the Cishaurim are at war with the Scarlet Spires.  Of course we know what this is, having read later volumes, but right now there is the suggestion that he could be Consult.  He is "too canny to be what he seems".  Are 'men' being deceived, as per the epigraph?

We also learn that the Psukhe does not leave a mark like other sorcery - Sasheoka could not distinguish "the works of the Cishaurim from the works of the God .  The God, and not Gods - what is the distinction?  We later learn that the Psukhe is driven by emotion rather than intellect (as far as I can remember).

First Esmenet POV - she loves Akka, and we find out why.  He lifts off the 'roof of her life' and "sun and world would come pouring in".  Inrau also loves Akka - loves him enough to "pay any price".  Why?  Akka is a giver.

In joining the Thousand Temples, Inrau has "gained everything.  Faith for knowledge, wisdom for cunning, heart for intellect".  More on the theme of reason versus emotion. Is Inrau manipulated by Akka, or is their relationship less cynical?  The way the text is worded (and previous Akka POV though re. Inrau) would suggest the latter, especially when contrasted with the Holy War and the opinions of the various Mandati (inc. Akka) about Maithanet.

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTDCB Chapter 3
« on: April 29, 2018, 11:53:44 am »
BFK's ARC: TDTCB, Chapter Three
Then, the scene in the tavern with Achamian, Inrau and Sarcellus. TheCulminatingApe thinks that Sarcellus = Consult is strongly hinted here. The hints are very subtle:
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The man [Sarcellus] between them, his face slack with upper-caste arrogance, met Achamian's eyes and nodded.
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The white of his elaborate tunic seemed to shrug off every shadow, but for some reason, his face did not. [italics added]
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Sarcellus smiled, but his large brown eyes remained curiously dead.
Just enough to plant some unease.

I was actually thinking of the bit after Sarcellus beats Akka up, and then whispers to him - something like "how I've longed to do that, pig" - seems over the top for the common or garden meathead, and suggests there is more going on than just Sarcellus being a bully who randomly batters people for a laugh. 
But yes, the stuff about his face and eyes do point skin-spy-wards, given what we later find out

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTDCB Chapter 3
« on: April 24, 2018, 07:22:13 pm »
A pretty good read, this Chapter.

Note Achamian's recollections of when he first experienced the onta "the collapse of seeing into being... or the collapse of subject and object?

The Tusk is described as "innocent", and later Maithanet tells Proyas that "it witnesses us, even as we behold it.  Shades of WHAT DO YOU SEE?

"... the place had become an artifact and the artifact a place.  To walk in Sumna was to walk through scripture.  A place with deep meaning

Maithanet is "as tall as any Norsirai - hints of his origin?  His name means "instruction" and he is "to be obeyed".

It is implied quite strongly that Sarcellus is Consult.

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB: Chapter 2
« on: April 19, 2018, 08:13:46 pm »
I do truly wonder how long Simas was a skin spy. My intuition tells me for years at least. But, I don't think he was when training Akka.

Perhaps he didnt start as Simas either. Hard to believe he could replace one of the Quorum on a first bet.

I don't think it has been Simas for so long, but maybe its been in the Mandate for decades. Maybe even as that peer/student Akka loved early on who later died... :)

Either the skin-spy has been Simas for some time, or it has been someone else in Atyersus that would have access to the whereabouts of Mandate agents/ informers.  It's very unlikely to have been another sorceror, because their absence when it switched to Simas would be a red flag.  I'm pretty sure we never get told anything about the organisation of the Mandate other than that the Quorum is a thing, but they must have servants, lackeys etc. 

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB: Chapter 2
« on: April 18, 2018, 06:41:10 pm »
We are slowly being introduced to the various factions in the Three Seas.  In Chapter 1 we are introduced to the Scarlet Spires, the Mandate, and the Cishaurim.  In Chapter 2 we learn more about the Mandate, we learn that the Cishaurim belong to a religion called Fanimry, and that there is another religion comprising something called the Thousand Temples, led by a Shriah.  We also learn that sorcerors are considered  'unclean' from a religious perspective and that holy wars have been waged against them in the past.

But perhaps there is a new player in the game.
"All have kissed his[Maithanet's] knee.  And with none of the political manoeuvering obligatory to such transitions of power... He has stirred something novel...and not merely within the Thousand Temples"
"This man is more than simply shrewd.  Far more."
"Maithanet is shrewd, a man of intellect"

Are these the first faint hints that a Dunyain is now active in the world?

As Akka thinks to himself in the audience hall at Atyersus, "...With every flicker the ground seemed to shift  Is this a hint that events are now taking place on Conditioned Ground?

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The Almanac: PON Edition / Re: ARC: TDTCB: Chapter 2
« on: April 17, 2018, 08:33:27 pm »
Simas describes Akka as open and weak, whereas Akka can think of few places more heartless than Atyersus.  Early suggestions that Akka is gay, before further detail tells us about the nature of his relationship with Inrau.  We then learn that Akka might love a woman - 'were he a man, and not a sorceror and a spy'.  Inrau never ceases to see beauty and can forgive the blemishes in other men - Akka helps him escape to protect his innocent nature.  He doesn't want Inrau to be affected the way was when he became Mandati, and he knows how cruel/ ruthless/ manipulative his fellows are.
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“It comes to this,” Simas continued. “Achamian befriends the people he uses, Nautzera. If he knew his contacts might be hunted, he would hesitate. And perhaps more important, if he knew that Atyersus itself had been infiltrated, he might censor the information he gave us in order to protect his contacts. Remember that he lied, Nautzera, risked the Gnosis itself, to protect that treacherous student of his.”

"But", Nautzera interjected, "we all know that faith is no friend to reason.  The distinction between rational and irrational mean little when one speaks of The Thousand Temples"

"This man is more than simply shrewd.  Far More" "Maithanet is shrewd, a man of intellect"

"the "mandate"...was.. to learn, to live from the past, not live in it"

"Besides," Nautzera added, "if you refuse to go, you merely force us to send someone - how should I put it? - less sentimental"

"ignorance is a potent tool. "As is knowledge"

Contradictions between rationality and emotion are set out here.  There is an implication that faith or feeling can be manipulated by intelligence or cunning - both in the quotes about Maithanet, and in the way Akka is 'convinced' to go to Sumna. 

We also learn that Akka is an open, caring man, perhaps to some appearing soft, or lacking ruthlessness.  Seswatha's Heart is first mentioned here, but it seems that Akka has retained his own as well.

There are echoes of some of the themes set out in the Prologue, where Kellhus appears to experience emotion and irrational sensations for the first time, and also realises that he can manipulate the world using his superior knowledge and intellect.

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BFK's ARC: Prologue

(Note: A lot of my questions and comments are just rhetorical. I'm trying, not very successfully, to maintain the illusion of a first-time careful reader.)

I agree with H, the Prologue is excellent.  An introduction to the Dûnyain and to Kellhus.

Prologue, first part, notes:

1. The Dûnyain are already in pursuit of "awareness most holy" when they arrive at Ishüal, and have repudiated the Gods.  They deliberately obliterate all records and evidence of sorcery. (pg. 4). What could they be up to?

2. Dûnyain: "We are Dûnyain, child. What reason could you have to fear us?"
Boy: "So long as men live, there are crimes!"
Dûnyain: "No, child. Only so long as men are deceived."

(Deception, we soon learn, is an art that the Dûnyain have mastered.)

3. The Dûnyain celebrate their discovery of Ishüal as a great correspondence of cause. What is a correspondence of cause? Who are these Dûnyain?

Doesn't cause have a more specific meaning to the Dunyain?  Also to me it seemed ambiguous as to whether they were celebrating the discovery of Ishual or of the Anasurimbor boy. 

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But, at this point in the story, be a easy thing for a skin spy to suss ya out. Their unheard of.

Not necessarily.  Just because he's not aware of them doesn't mean they know what he is.

The rest of the chapter is somewhat unremarkable, aside the fortuitous timing of Akka's being recalled.  Although, in light of us knowing that there was a Skin-Spy in the Mandate, possibly even at this point, was this really a coincidence?  On first reading, my presumption is the Akka has a "narrow miss" with the Skin-Spy, but considering that already knew of him, knew his location and his identity, Akka was allowed to continue the whole time.  Akka being recalled and Geshrunni being killed is not a coincidence at all, or just some manipulation of "fate" but rather a direct Consult plan to use Akka to garner information.

However, I forgot about the skin-spy in the Mandate, in which case they would know what he was - and where. 

Wouldn't a skin-spy Geshrunni give access to the Scarlet Spires rather than to Akka?

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My thoughts.
The Prologue is far better than Chapter 1, which contains a lot of clunky exposition.

Prologue: Always same things strike me here. First one is the Bardic Priest. I believe he was Consult and knowing what we know from TUC the Dunyain eventually "take over" the Consult, the Duyain could very well been lead there by the Consult, Mek or the like.....and just forgot.
I don't think he's in the Consult, but his line "there are no crimes when no one is left alive seems to foreshadow what the Consult are all about, i.e. if they kill enough people, then there is not enough judgement to cause damnation.

When the Dunyain are celebrating at the end of Prologue 1, are they celebrating finding Ishual, or a live Anasurimbor, or both?

Prologue 2 implies that the Dunyain live in a world where everything is predictable and to a large extent predetermined.  There a line about them knowing hows leaves would fall (or something similar).  The chaos of the world outside seems to awaken emotion in Kellhus - stuff about the sweetness of water and the beauty of sunlight which seems to surprise him.  Talks to his father in his head - doesn't seem like Dunyain rationality - the first inklings of his 'madness'

Then there's the line where he says he will make the people his instruments, and that he would possess all peoples and all circumstances.  It's there in black and white.  That's what he's been about all along.  At the end, from the encounter with the non-Man, we now know that he intends to learn sorcery.

Chapter 1.  Tells us Akka is not that good a spy - i.e. not great at deceiving people.  He's been sussed out by his informant and by the skin-spy

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