Interestingly enough, Lorenzo and the Dragons (whom I assume are fleshed out in chapters one through nine) are what drew my attention most in chapters ten & eleven. Though, I've already suffered the aforementioned revelation
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. To be fair, I'm not sure the two chapters are comparable and both are written well for their genre.
Thankfully, delavagus, despite your humility, you are writing some of the more articulate fiction out there. I'll enjoy attaching myself regardless.