The Burning God by R. F. Kuang (1)
I was very disappointed with this book. The first book was decent, the second improved and showed some real promise, but this final was... not good. I actually liked the ending. The last chapter, while it didn't make up for the 600 pages that came before it, actually was well done.
The dedication at the front of the book made me wary at the outset; "To my dear readers, who stayed with this series until the end, and came prepared with a bucket for their tears." I had really no emotional investment in any of the characters or their relationships after two books, so the author presuming she'll make me cry (which isn't an impossible task) did not sit well.
The story itself, even from the first book, is pretty shaky. People working hand in hand with others who've been trying to kill them without taking a moment to reflect on the matter. Characters do really stupid things, which is fine if they are a stupid person, but even supposed geniuses or savant constantly make poor decisions. I only know they are geniuses because the author says they are.
Frequently it seemed like the author didn't know what was going on in her own story. Some examples (there are many more): A group of refugees flee through abandoned mines; they emerge and we shortly get a description of supply wagons they brought with them, which I find hard to imagine they could bring through. There are dirigibles from another country; one crashes (it is noted the balloon is deflated), and a "genius" character looks at it a while, then makes it work; I'm not sure where he found the gas to fill it, there is no mention of it being a heated air situation either.
The whole book seemed slapped together without any real thought. Things happened because the author wanted/needed them to without any real logic or flow. It also seemed like before every page break or chapter ending, the author wanted to throw in a really cool, dramatic, poppy (yes), line; but they invariably fell flat for me, and I think I might have physically rolled my eyes a couple times.
Don't read it, unless you though the first two were absolutely amazing. I thought they were ok. This book needed a better editor or more authorial diligence. But the ending (last chapter) was pretty good at least.