The Second Apocalypse

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Title: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:14:57 pm
Quote from: Duskweaver
And this is not a child
Playing with words
Once spoken in holy gift
Rejected for their mirrored reproach
Of sins
Salting the Ground
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:15:06 pm
Quote from: Madness
Sorcerer? Good stuff, Duskweaver.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:15:35 pm
Quote from: bbaztek
Roses are red, violets are blue, my schlong is so pendelous, its got morning dew
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:15:42 pm
Quote from: Duskweaver
Quote from: Madness
Sorcerer? Good stuff, Duskweaver.
I could be glib and say it's not about a sorcerer  ;) . But, really, it's both more specific than that, and somewhat wider in scope of reference.

I'm not really happy with line 3, but that in itself seems oddly fitting.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:15:51 pm
Quote from: Madness
Interesting none the less. It worked well for my associations.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:15:58 pm
Quote from: Garet Jax
"There Is a Hell Believe Me I've Seen It, There Is a Heaven Let's Keep It a Secret"

Cover Art Here (http://www.6squid.com/wp-content/uploads/Bring-Me-The-Horizon-TIAHBMISITIAHLKIAS.jpg)

Never thought an album name and it's associated cover art would remind of me Nonmen and Bakker...

It's a sickness, and there is only one cure.  More cowbell.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:16:05 pm
Quote from: Curethan
Should change their name to "Captain and the Scalpers".

Also my favourite valentines/breakup poem;

Roses are shit,
Violets are shit,
Everything is shit,
Fuck you.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:16:14 pm
Quote from: Callan S.
My slog brings all the boys to the yard.

There, like, a slog of slogs!

Damn right, it's the slog of slogs!

I could teach you, but I'd have to Judge.
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:16:22 pm
Quote from: bbaztek
Quote from: Callan S.
My slog brings all the boys to the yard.

There, like, a slog of slogs!

Damn right, it's the slog of slogs!

I could teach you, but I'd have to Judge.

should have sent a poet  :cry:
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:16:31 pm
Quote from: Madness
Umm... pssh, he's clearly ripping off the masterful poetic stylings of... whatever the fuck milkshake girl's name was ;).
Title: Re: This is not a poem
Post by: What Came Before on June 02, 2013, 04:16:40 pm
Quote from: Duskweaver
Quote from: Madness
whatever the fuck milkshake girl's name was ;).
Kellhus = Kelis... :shock:

The world conspires, man. :P