The Second Apocalypse

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Title: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 18, 2016, 06:02:55 pm
And, finally, the "other half" of the excerpt we got back in 2012.

http://fantasyhotlist.blogspot.ca/2016/05/extract-from-r-scott-bakkers-great_18.html

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Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: profgrape on May 18, 2016, 07:22:17 pm
Well, that answered a bunch of open questions.

1. Who destroyed the monestary?  The Consult, and specifically, "Shriekers" (Sranc) and "Singers" (Erratics).

2. How do the Dunyain reproduce? The old-fashioned way with a horrible, albeit somewhat predictable, twist.

3. Are there any Dunyain left? Yes, there are at least two.  Although 1.7 might be closer based on the description we get of Koringhus.

4. Are the Dunyain ev-il like the fru-its of the dev-il? All signs point to yes.  Note that this corroborates Kellhus' describing them as a "terrible race" in Chapter 1.  And if you believe Seswatha to be "good", this also likely closes the door on the connection between Seswatha and the Dunyain.

And as always, with the answers, we get more questions:

1. What was Kellhus' mission?  Koringhus asking "Has he grasped the Absolute?" might imply that Kellhus' mission was something greater than going after his father.  I know that this is the goal of all Dunyain.  But the way he asked it makes me wonder...

2. If the Dunyain are ev-il, who's side are they on?  TJE views the Dunyain as monsters and as mentioned above, so does Kellhus in Chapter 1.  But they sure don't seem to be aligned with the Consult. 

3. Is Koringhus the Anasurimbor of the Celmoman prophecy?  The kid's comment about how the "Logos has always burned brightest within him" makes me wonder if he is the chosen one, no Kellhus or as some have speculated, Mimara's baby.

4. What's up with the "hus" names?  Moenghus, Kellhus and now, Koringhus.  Could just be a Dunyain tradition. 

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Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 18, 2016, 08:49:34 pm
This book is going to be something else. Madness wasn't joking when he said i'll need to read all of it in the bath.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 18, 2016, 08:57:18 pm
Just scanned through it real quick, ill read it later.

1. Axlotl tanks, whale mothers......whatever. Spoke too soon, eh?

2. A lot of revelation here, but what stands out to me is that Koringhus knows of Kellhus. So, I can only assume that Kellhus is the culmination of the Dunyain plan. More later.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 18, 2016, 09:21:27 pm
Who culled more sranc, the Dunyain or the Scalpers? Sorry need more time to process the serious shit.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: profgrape on May 18, 2016, 10:16:58 pm
I hope that Koringhus doesn't die too soon.  Akka's description of him was pretty amazing, how he effectively prioritized his injuries to prolong his life.  Total badass.

Also, based on the revelation in Chapter 1 regarding the Gods and what TJE has seen so far, I'm wondering if only Men are damned.  Women are objectively lesser in the Gods eyes and therefore, outside the whole damnation cycle.   The Consult was able to turn Ieva by showing her fate (presumably via the Inverse Fire).  But that doesn't mean it was true. 
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 18, 2016, 10:44:22 pm
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“We fought them for years.”

Holy shit, just imagine... 
These 5 words pack so much into them.

And this
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“The Survivor carried me in,” he said. “The Survivor walked me out. The Logos has always burned brightest within him. None among the brethren stood so close to the Absolute as he.”

He could not have known Kellhus, but we know that Kellhus was supposed to be exceptional as a Dunyain. Maybe ALL the anasurimbor are exceptional for some reason.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on May 19, 2016, 12:53:06 am
Well it seems that my speculation that some Dunyain survived was correct, and my further speculation that Akka would be forced to teach Dunyain children might also be correct. I wonder why the two did not leave Ishual, maybe the sranc were to numerous nearby. Koringhus would atleast be in his mid twenties and the child is old to come along. I can see them trying to find the Great Ordeal, bringing along the son of Kellhuss, if Kellhuss was a prodigy even for the Dunyain and his son is the closest to the Absolute, then maybe Koringhus is the one the Celmommian Prophecy spoke of. That would be an awesome conversation between the two of them. I get the feeling that Kellhuss does not plan to survive this and if their is another time jump then we may have just met humanity's true saviors.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on May 19, 2016, 02:12:47 am
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“We fought them for years.”

Holy shit, just imagine... 
These 5 words pack so much into them.

Yeeeaah. This is one of my favorites:

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The spoor of a thousand mortal battles, of a Dûnyain in extremis, pursuing the intangible lines of survival and triumph through countless threshing swords, playing the margins of his own flesh, ignoring all but the most lethal incisions, so that he might kill and kill and overcome... Endure.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: profgrape on May 19, 2016, 02:23:18 am
A-men, Madness -- Koringhus is one serious mofo.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 19, 2016, 04:39:48 am
Man, so much to process in so little words. First off, from these two excerpts it definitely seems as if Bakker has hit his stride as an author. Its just so Damn good, and he's able to pack so much meaning in every sentence. Its gonna be a great ride.

1. So, the whale mothers, as they're coming to be known as, is a bit of a put off to me. I found the idea of axlotl tanks ridiculous for many different reasons, but namely that it's a rip off from another writer. Maybe it's a homage, I just would be like something different. That said, it is a  absolute horror to say the least. And, from these excerpts I imagine things are going to get very dark from here on out.

2. The Consult destroyed Ishual. How did they find it, the map? That's what I assume, but could Mek have his hand in this?

3. Koringhus is definitely a striking character to say the least. His question at the end about if Kellhus had grasped the Absolute, tells me two things. He knows about his father going out into the world, so the brothers that received the dreams did not in fact commit suicide. Two, Kellhus is the culmination of the Dunyain's plan, to grasp the Absolute.

4. As Bakker told Pat that this is just the first chapter in Ishual, I think there is a lot more that will be revealed. More minds blown, you might say.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 19, 2016, 05:42:34 am
For me the thing that stuck out is when Mimara suddenly seeing the Truth(well as much as the judging eye is truth) of Kellhus, and her first thought it to warn her mother. Really jarring and showing how deeply it affected her.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on May 19, 2016, 08:49:52 pm
SJ on question 3 I think it was simply them looking for long enough, if the child remembers going into the underground and coming out, then this happened in the 5 or so years. At the end of the warrior prophet they began to look and in the thousandfold thought Cnaiur the Consult Ishual is in the mountains, then it took maybe 15 years of searching for them to find it.

Will the identity of child be revealed? He could be a cousin or even grandchild of Kellhus, I think he is being overlooked because of the awesomeness of Koringhus.

I wonder why Koringhus is the survivor? Was he the only fully trained Dunyain, and the child is not considered a full Dunyain sort of like a padawan.

On the question of Koringhus it is said that the Dunyain push each generation to the very limits of their ability and that is why they progress, if Kellhus was the greatest Dunyain ever in terms of skills and his son is considered the closest to the Absolute then maybe Koringhus is superior to Kellhus. But where can this merry band go? I doubt to Isheteribinth and the three seas is to far, so the great ordeal would seem the only option.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: profgrape on May 19, 2016, 10:39:10 pm
@Ciogli, I think Koringhus was the survivor because of his closeness to the Absolute. 

This is assuming that with this closeness comes martial proficiency -- and I think the short description we get of him establishes his badassitude.  But it also might be that as the closest, he was the most valued among the Dunyain and as a result, they effectively gave their lives for his.

As for their next destination, it's anybody's guess.  Ishteribinth is closest.  But given Cleric's revelation that they've gone over to the Consult, it seems like they'd avoid going that way. 

The Ordeal makes more sense.  Akka and Mim want to stop Kellhus and it stands to reason that Koringhus or the kid would want to meet up with the only other living Dunyain.  That being said, the Ordeal is *really* far away -- on Spiral Horizon's map, it's at least 1000 miles.  So either they 1) dragoon a Nonmen chariot that's stashed in the Thousand Thousand Halls or 2) try for a crossing at the Leash so they can meet up with the Ordeal closer to Golgatterath.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Odium on May 19, 2016, 11:05:04 pm
I'm a little shocked at how startlingly accurate some of the forum's predictions have been. The axolotl tanks coming true were a bit of a shocker. I have to disagree with MSJ though - as someone who has experienced it myself in my writing, I think it's difficult to avoid referencing the works that inspire you in your own creations. I mean, they form and shape you in so many ways. I doubt it would have disappointed you if it hadn't been the subject of much scrutiny on this forum, and pried apart as a potential homage to Herbert and to Dune over the years of questioning what's up with the Dunyain women. Besides, there's a thread on this forum that analyzes all the references Bakker has woven into the Second Apocalypse series, and it's quite a tapestry.

I'm getting a lot of Yatwer vibes (describing her belly as a sickle?) from Mimara. I think the Judging Eye will be the crux of the metaphysical conflict to come - clearly it's an interest for the Consult, Kellhus and the Hundred.

I have to say though, I've seen a detail mentioned before that is becoming more and more salient to me: if there are so many Sranc in the North, so many that between the Dunyain, the scalpers, the Great Ordeal, there's still an incomprehensibly vast amount of them... By all rights the Sranc should have eradicated mankind a long, long time ago. If there's an entire subspecies of them dedicated to leading their roving bands, if the Erratics under the Consult have mustered a great many of them as an army, then even despite the No-God's absence I just can't think of why they've taken so long to reduce the population to 144k. The Consult have had this one in the bag for the last couple of centuries at least, why on Earwa have they been waiting for mankind to muster its forces and cut their way into Mordor?
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: profgrape on May 19, 2016, 11:28:59 pm
The Consult have had this one in the bag for the last couple of centuries at least, why on Earwa have they been waiting for mankind to muster its forces and cut their way into Mordor?

That is an awesome question and IIRC one we've mused on in the past. 

I think it's probably a matter of scale.  The Ten-Yoke Legion could manage 100k Sranc.  But what would it take to coordinate millions?  I think that's why the No-God becomes necessary to their plan -- there simply isn't enough Consult leadership to lead an army of that size.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on May 19, 2016, 11:32:38 pm
Odium I think it is because the Consult does not truly control the sranc except in proximity, think of the sranc on the plain chasing the skin eaters, they were bent on taking the skin eaters and only the intervention of the skinspy stopped them. And even then only the scent stayed their hand for a little while and the skinspy had to kill the leader, like a wolf taking out the alpha to become the new alpha. They did not know of the Consult, it was not even a myth to them. The brilliance of the sranc design has also made them uncontrollable except with the No-God, they multiply so fast and over so vast an area that they cannot be controlled. They are like ants, if left unchecked they will dominate the landscape, the Meorish peoples who became the middle-north believe themselves better because they battles the sranc clans for a millennia on the long side. Even now they battle them, in the judging eye it was said that some clans became scalpoi in an almost religious cause. They and the sclvendi have been a bulwark against the sranc coming into the three seas.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 19, 2016, 11:44:49 pm
@Odium, I understand where coming from completely. I just don't like the idea of it. Is it something that weighs heavily on my mind? No. I just was expecting a bit more originality. Its just a personal preference, and has no effect on how much I love the story. And, as I said, it was done well. It was a horrific scene to read about. Don't put too much stock into my complaints over the matter, lol.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 20, 2016, 05:14:19 am
SJ on question 3 I think it was simply them looking for long enough, if the child remembers going into the underground and coming out, then this happened in the 5 or so years. At the end of the warrior prophet they began to look and in the thousandfold thought Cnaiur the Consult Ishual is in the mountains, then it took maybe 15 years of searching for them to find it.

Will the identity of child be revealed? He could be a cousin or even grandchild of Kellhus, I think he is being overlooked because of the awesomeness of Koringhus.

I wonder why Koringhus is the survivor? Was he the only fully trained Dunyain, and the child is not considered a full Dunyain sort of like a padawan.

On the question of Koringhus it is said that the Dunyain push each generation to the very limits of their ability and that is why they progress, if Kellhus was the greatest Dunyain ever in terms of skills and his son is considered the closest to the Absolute then maybe Koringhus is superior to Kellhus. But where can this merry band go? I doubt to Isheteribinth and the three seas is to far, so the great ordeal would seem the only option.
Akka can probably teach him the gnosis in a few weeks, then they can go anywhere ;)
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wic on May 20, 2016, 09:10:55 am
Haha! If Akka taught another Dunyain the gnosis he'd deserve what he gets. 

I'm very much hoping once he gets over his initial terror he'll realize that so long as he has standing wards, he has nothing to fear from either of them, and in fact their continued existence is purely at his dispensation.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 20, 2016, 09:26:38 am
Akka picked a bad week to give up Qirri.

Akka seems in a bad way mentally at the end of the that excerpt. The Qirri normally dulls stuff but he's info overloaded.

Mimara has two chorae on her, so he's not clear of danger at all.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wic on May 20, 2016, 09:57:43 am
Mimara has two chorae on her, so he's not clear of danger at all.
Oh hell, that's a good point.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 20, 2016, 06:40:05 pm
Mimara has two chorae on her, so he's not clear of danger at all.
Oh hell, that's a good point.
Akka should be fine. He's got skin wards as well as the spherical ones. As long he's not touch Mimara he should be fine.
Mimara OTOH, is in much more danger.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 20, 2016, 07:19:34 pm
Mimara has two chorae on her, so he's not clear of danger at all.
Oh hell, that's a good point.
Akka should be fine. He's got skin wards as well as the spherical ones. As long he's not touch Mimara he should be fine.
Mimara OTOH, is in much more danger.

I was meaning the Dunyain getting the Chorae off her to use on Akka. It's not like he can't play a long game if needed to get it.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 20, 2016, 07:48:35 pm
Thinking on Koringhus and the child today. What is so special about the boy that Koringhus saves him and carries him into the TTH and protects him for those long years? He is Dunyain after all, and they don't brook much sympathy for others. What makes the Dunyain that burns the brightest with the Logos, save a babe?
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 20, 2016, 08:11:31 pm
Mimara has two chorae on her, so he's not clear of danger at all.
Oh hell, that's a good point.
Akka should be fine. He's got skin wards as well as the spherical ones. As long he's not touch Mimara he should be fine.
Mimara OTOH, is in much more danger.

I was meaning the Dunyain getting the Chorae off her to use on Akka. It's not like he can't play a long game if needed to get it.

Oh yeah, you're totally right. Didn't even consider that lol.

Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wic on May 20, 2016, 10:59:58 pm
I was meaning the Dunyain getting the Chorae off her to use on Akka. It's not like he can't play a long game if needed to get it.
Oh I thought you meant he can't protect her with those on so they're still vulnerable.

I'd think that only happens if they subconsciously reveal what those chorae do. But I expect them to make it to the GO, so...plot armor.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wic on May 20, 2016, 11:01:10 pm
Sure hope that kid isn't a skinspy sorcerer using Cants of Compulsion to manipulate Koringhus.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on May 21, 2016, 03:30:05 am
MSJ I think for the boy it was just chance, if the Dunyain know they have not grasped the Absolute, then the next generation is their only hope to achieve the mission. And so all of the young ones would have been brought to the thousand thousand halls, he happened to be the only survivor.

But since we know the world conspires I think the child will be very important, going off my theory that Ishual is Gondolin and the bloodline that defeated Morgoth came from there. The fact that the child has one hand may be a nod to Beren One Handed who stole a Simaril from Morgoth crown.

Whatever happens with the Ordeal I think their will have to be a time jump, all of these new characters will need time to come to the fore.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 21, 2016, 05:47:25 pm

But since we know the world conspires I think the child will be very important, going off my theory that Ishual is Gondolin and the bloodline that defeated Morgoth came from there. The fact that the child has one hand may be a nod to Beren One Handed who stole a Simaril from Morgoth crown.

Yea, I was thinking that maybe he was Koringhus's son. Or, he is a prodigy nonetheless. I don't agree that Koringhus saves him by chance, that the boy was lucky enough to be in the right place at the right time. Bakker said this is just the first chapter in Ishual, so I can only assume there is plenty more revelation to come. Stay tuned. I know I will.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on May 21, 2016, 11:44:54 pm
Missed these before:

This book is going to be something else. Madness wasn't joking when he said i'll need to read all of it in the bath.

Lol. Indeed.

Man, so much to process in so little words. First off, from these two excerpts it definitely seems as if Bakker has hit his stride as an author. Its just so Damn good, and he's able to pack so much meaning in every sentence. Its gonna be a great ride.

Yeah. As I mentioned, I think it's the insane time he's taken to create these associations in his readership, which allow every word now to be worth like... a paragraph in an earlier book.

It's a fucking doozy :).
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Walter on May 25, 2016, 05:32:42 pm

I have to say though, I've seen a detail mentioned before that is becoming more and more salient to me: if there are so many Sranc in the North, so many that between the Dunyain, the scalpers, the Great Ordeal, there's still an incomprehensibly vast amount of them... By all rights the Sranc should have eradicated mankind a long, long time ago. If there's an entire subspecies of them dedicated to leading their roving bands, if the Erratics under the Consult have mustered a great many of them as an army, then even despite the No-God's absence I just can't think of why they've taken so long to reduce the population to 144k. The Consult have had this one in the bag for the last couple of centuries at least, why on Earwa have they been waiting for mankind to muster its forces and cut their way into Mordor?

I don't think the Consult are in command of the Sranc.  That's what they need the No-God for.  It possesses all the Sranc, and nowadays that would be automatic victory.  The Consult, unaided, can't herd enough Sranc together to defeat human armies with School support.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 25, 2016, 07:11:37 pm
Odium, it seems the Consult long ago abandoned that track. They did that against the Nonman, open warfare, and lost. They did it again with sranc, and lost, beaten back to Golgotterath. They did it a third time during the 1st apocalypse, even before they had the No-God. They released the No-God to have absolute control over the horde, and lost.

To many times they have thought they had insurmountable odds. How could they lose with all their might? The Tekne, their own magics, sranc/weapon-races, later the Quya on their side...

They probably think the God's against them, or at the very least they don't want to risk losing. They turned to skin-spies and slowly made Men forget. They have been subverting Earwa in a much different way this time around, until Kellhus came along and brought the war to them.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Odium on May 25, 2016, 08:00:58 pm

I don't think the Consult are in command of the Sranc.  That's what they need the No-God for.  It possesses all the Sranc, and nowadays that would be automatic victory.  The Consult, unaided, can't herd enough Sranc together to defeat human armies with School support.

Someone else said that on the last page. I agree they seem to be herding the Sranc more than commanding them thus far, but they've still managed to muster a swarm large enough to opaque the earth, dwarf the host of all the nations of Men, and wage war on the Dunyain to the point of driving them to extinction. They could have conquered any of the southern kingdoms before Kellhus organized them into the largest army of Men since the First Apocalypse, before the Swayali existed and other Schools were forced to cooperate as opposed to busying themselves with the squabbles of their internal factions etc.

It's just my opinion - if I were writing the series, it would be a particular detail that I couldn't just handwave away.

Odium, it seems the Consult long ago abandoned that track. They did that against the Nonman, open warfare, and lost. They did it again with sranc, and lost, beaten back to Golgotterath. They did it a third time during the 1st apocalypse, even before they had the No-God. They released the No-God to have absolute control over the horde, and lost.

To many times they have thought they had insurmountable odds. How could they lose with all their might? The Tekne, their own magics, sranc/weapon-races, later the Quya on their side...

They probably think the God's against them, or at the very least they don't want to risk losing. They turned to skin-spies and slowly made Men forget. They have been subverting Earwa in a much different way this time around, until Kellhus came along and brought the war to them.

I find your argument somewhat more convincing. Like I said above, I don't want to stray into the same territory I critique below (picking apart instead of giving in to my suspension of disbelief on a detail that's reasonable for the sake of the narrative), but I still think it's a bit... overblown in the text. The Sranc have had several thousand generations to breed without any kind of environmental pressure to limit their growing population. The Quya are pretty much under the Consult's thumb. The Mandate is crippled compared to the school it was during the First Apocalypse.

But after thinking about it more it doesn't really detract from the narrative. I just can't help but see it as an oversight in a series that has worked so exhaustively to make its world seem real and functioning within its own parameters. But I guess that's where fate comes in.

Re: whale-mothers and the silly controversy they've been provoking - I am certain I recall a quote about Nonmen who grew until death (unless we decided this was poetic license by Bakker). If the Dunyain possess at least some measure of ancient Nonmen blood, does it not make the exaggerated sexual dimorphism a little more credible in-universe? The fact that it's been brought under such scrutiny compared to other supernatural elements of the series is a little telling about how chafed the fandom's ass is about anything related to the whole feminism subplot.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Darzin on May 26, 2016, 01:44:01 am
Well regarding the whale mothers I think some of it is our world doesn't have gods or sorcerers but it does have human genetics. So people can pick up on that as being unrealistic. Your right Bakker does have an out with nonmen genetics, but it didn't sit well with me regardless of that. For one it seems to be getting rid of realism in favor of horror the Dunyain are efficient and amoral, and if the women are Dunyain as well there is no reason to restrain them and furthermore knowing what we know of human biology keeping women in such conditions is not conducive to a healthy pregnancy and bringing a child to term.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on May 26, 2016, 02:12:12 pm
It's interesting how much fixation can come from a single excerpt - out of context, as I don't believe Pat verified which chapter his excerpt was just that it was the first Achamian and Mimara chapter (via his blog) and that that chapter doesn't appear until a couple hundred pages into the book rather than being chapter one as Bakker had said when he gave us the excerpt so long ago (as per Pat's reading reflections at Westeros, which I believe profgrape quoted here in their own thread).

Ultimately, I think TGO will shake Bakker's readership up in ways that previous volumes haven't - a lot of possibility for longtime fans to be renewed or dissuaded in their fervour and for new readers to deny that fervour or take it up as their own.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Darzin on May 26, 2016, 02:23:50 pm
Fair enough, for me I'm a little fixated just because this is the first thing in the second apocalypse that has really challenged my suspension of disbelief. I think you're right that part of it is just having this little bit to analyze leads to much greater focus on it then if we got the whole book.

I'm welcome to be shaken I still love Bakker but I admit that the first series will always be my favorite,mainly for personal reasons. I didn't believe the gods were real then and truthfully I prefer more of a focus on human affairs. The fact of how many people are damned just makes the rich and detailed cultures Bakker has created seem kind of pointless, which I get is the point. I'm not really criticizing him more sharing my preferences.   
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on May 26, 2016, 02:31:28 pm
Yeah, please don't take any of that as attack, Darzin.

I'm just teasing out the fabric of the happenings as they happen. I guess the wannabe scientist in me likes observing phenomenon and describing them rather than projecting onto them :).

I think you're right that part of it is just having this little bit to analyze leads to much greater focus on it then if we got the whole book.

Lol - I've maintained pretty much since day 1 of my 730ish between Past Madness getting the draft and Future Madness reading the canon artifact that I thought giving the fandom the rest of that chapter specifically was too much. This fixation on the 'Whale-Mothers' on the part of the Westerosi was to be expected whenever they read that portion. Since Bakker didn't seem to mind revealing the 'Whale-Mothers,' 'Seeing the Dunyain with the Eye,' or 'Koringhus,' there were definitely other portions of the books that he might have released in place of this one specifically.

You're totally right that no matter what portion we got, we'd be fixated on it.

I'm not really criticizing him more sharing my preferences.   

And I hope no behavior here has dissuaded you from continuing to do so in the future, criticism or preference :).
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Darzin on May 26, 2016, 02:45:18 pm
No I don't feel attacked at all I just wanted to clarify my reasons for not liking the chapter, which aren't the same as some other people at Westros and seems to have got a bit personal. It's not about Bakker and women, it just didn't work for me.

Did you talk to Bakker personally about that chapter? Because given some of the criticism he's faced I feel that maybe this wasn't the best one to release given that it was going to be read and re-read and endlessly discussed. I'd be interested to know why he chose this part to release.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on May 26, 2016, 02:55:49 pm
Westerosi getting personal. Lol - maybe it's just the medium or atmosphere over there because I'm hardly guiltless of attacking people at Westeros in my previous frustrations (which Wilshire has possibly helped me manage forever ;)).

I did talk to Bakker about that chapter - not that I cared about the Westerosi response to the 'Whale-Mothers' because there are at least three or four other moments in the book that are going to have the average Westerosi typing out a thousand words in vehement condemnation. For me, I felt like those three narrative revelations I mentioned above were just too much for an excerpt.

Overlook picked the safe bet by releasing the prologue and the first chapter. But as I said, knowing Bakker was comfortable with releasing this excerpt to Pat, I tried to council other portions - pieces that showcase his writing generally (of which there are so many!) rather than specifically rewarding readers waiting on volume six of The Second Apocalypse, as any given portion of this volume is going to excite existing fans.

However, as I've repeated this enough for it to become catechism at this point: a good advisor advises and doesn't upbraid his liege when that liege doesn't act as the advisor advised ;).

Probably, Darzin, given that any piece of TGO is going to be relevatory, Bakker just decided to honour that Pat was going to get that specific excerpt promised so long ago in 2012.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Darzin on May 26, 2016, 03:11:15 pm
OK makes sense. Though I have to say if that level of revelation is in almost every chapter that really does set up TGO to be a truly epic book.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: mrganondorf on May 26, 2016, 05:24:26 pm
For me the thing that stuck out is when Mimara suddenly seeing the Truth(well as much as the judging eye is truth) of Kellhus, and her first thought it to warn her mother. Really jarring and showing how deeply it affected her.

TEASING
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on May 26, 2016, 06:25:18 pm
Well regarding the whale mothers I think some of it is our world doesn't have gods or sorcerers but it does have human genetics. So people can pick up on that as being unrealistic. Your right Bakker does have an out with nonmen genetics, but it didn't sit well with me regardless of that. For one it seems to be getting rid of realism in favor of horror the Dunyain are efficient and amoral, and if the women are Dunyain as well there is no reason to restrain them and furthermore knowing what we know of human biology keeping women in such conditions is not conducive to a healthy pregnancy and bringing a child to term.

Lots of assumptions there. At what point has the surface of what has been revealed remained clear throughout the series? Good/bad/damned/saved... Things don't ever seem to be what they are in TSA.
The women aren't necessarily prisoners, or unwilling participants. Other options exist.
Their sexual dimorphism is not ridiculous given IRL biology (See bakker's comments on the subject on TPB).
People  take their past experience and apply it to current situations, the problem is that, like here, if you have a deep understanding (say, of biology) you might see this as perfectly reasonable, but if all you've got is what you remember from  high school biology a decade ago, you might think its impossible. Sometimes it works vice versa though. 

Lots of TSA is about letting the story challenge you and your assumptions, science and religion included.

I'll admit I thought it seemed impossible as I read it, but I've found that it can pretty easily be explained away within the confines of Earwa Lore and/or IRL science. However, I didn't come upon the solution myself. I needed to discuss it with others.

Unfortunately, when you've got a small in-group and narrow conversation lines (ie a few active participants and one single forum thread...), the assumptions and conclusions of the few will seem to be the general consensus of the many, while simultaneously shutting down constructive conversations and abstract thinking.

Speaking broadly, for those that don't WANT there to be a possible explanation, then no amount of evidence will convince otherwise - even if an answers is served to them directly from the author. The need to be personally 'right' is more important than the story itself.
For those interested in maintaining suspension of disbelief so that they can continue to enjoy the series, suitable answers can be found. The latter being far more difficult than former.

Honestly though, for me, in the end its a fantasy series with magic and gods, space faring aliens and laser guns. Limiting what can happen in Earwa based on what's reality in present day Earth seems crazy. Why bother reading fantasy/sci-fi then? If you're interested enough, a suitable reason within the book, any book, should exist to explain whatever situation (if the book was written with care).
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: mrganondorf on May 26, 2016, 06:48:29 pm
For me the thing that stuck out is when Mimara suddenly seeing the Truth(well as much as the judging eye is truth) of Kellhus, and her first thought it to warn her mother. Really jarring and showing how deeply it affected her.

TEASING

META-TEASING
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on May 26, 2016, 08:03:48 pm
Well regarding the whale mothers I think some of it is our world doesn't have gods or sorcerers but it does have human genetics. So people can pick up on that as being unrealistic. Your right Bakker does have an out with nonmen genetics, but it didn't sit well with me regardless of that. For one it seems to be getting rid of realism in favor of horror the Dunyain are efficient and amoral, and if the women are Dunyain as well there is no reason to restrain them and furthermore knowing what we know of human biology keeping women in such conditions is not conducive to a healthy pregnancy and bringing a child to term.

Lots of assumptions there. At what point has the surface of what has been revealed remained clear throughout the series? Good/bad/damned/saved... Things don't ever seem to be what they are in TSA.
The women aren't necessarily prisoners, or unwilling participants. Other options exist.
Their sexual dimorphism is not ridiculous given IRL biology (See bakker's comments on the subject on TPB).
People  take their past experience and apply it to current situations, the problem is that, like here, if you have a deep understanding (say, of biology) you might see this as perfectly reasonable, but if all you've got is what you remember from  high school biology a decade ago, you might think its impossible. Sometimes it works vice versa though. 

Lots of TSA is about letting the story challenge you and your assumptions, science and religion included.

I'll admit I thought it seemed impossible as I read it, but I've found that it can pretty easily be explained away within the confines of Earwa Lore and/or IRL science. However, I didn't come upon the solution myself. I needed to discuss it with others.

Unfortunately, when you've got a small in-group and narrow conversation lines (ie a few active participants and one single forum thread...), the assumptions and conclusions of the few will seem to be the general consensus of the many, while simultaneously shutting down constructive conversations and abstract thinking.

Speaking broadly, for those that don't WANT there to be a possible explanation, then no amount of evidence will convince otherwise - even if an answers is served to them directly from the author. The need to be personally 'right' is more important than the story itself.
For those interested in maintaining suspension of disbelief so that they can continue to enjoy the series, suitable answers can be found. The latter being far more difficult than former.

Honestly though, for me, in the end its a fantasy series with magic and gods, space faring aliens and laser guns. Limiting what can happen in Earwa based on what's reality in present day Earth seems crazy. Why bother reading fantasy/sci-fi then? If you're interested enough, a suitable reason within the book, any book, should exist to explain whatever situation (if the book was written with care).

Well said, Wilshire, we'll said. I agree with entirety of your post. Also, I think it all harkens back to the feminism and those that have a disdain for Bakker because of it. To me, it's fantasy, I don't need it to be realistic in a world with magic and such, as you just said. Just part of a great story to me.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 26, 2016, 08:28:57 pm
For me the thing that stuck out is when Mimara suddenly seeing the Truth(well as much as the judging eye is truth) of Kellhus, and her first thought it to warn her mother. Really jarring and showing how deeply it affected her.

TEASING

META-TEASING

No idea what you're meaning.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on May 26, 2016, 08:43:26 pm
Could the dragons actually fly would be another question.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: CFKane on June 07, 2016, 12:01:08 am
And as always, with the answers, we get more questions:

...

2. If the Dunyain are ev-il, who's side are they on?  TJE views the Dunyain as monsters and as mentioned above, so does Kellhus in Chapter 1.  But they sure don't seem to be aligned with the Consult. 

Blast from the past: In Thousandfold Thought, when Kellhus confronts Moenghus:

Quote from: Thousandfold Thought
“These voices,” Moënghus said with slow deliberation, “what do they say of me?”

His father, Kellhus realized, had finally grasped the principles of this encounter. Moënghus had assumed that his son would be the one requiring instruction. He had not foreseen it as possible, let alone inevitable, that the Thousandfold Thought would outgrow the soul of its incubation—and discard it. “They warn me,” Kellhus said, “that you are Dûnyain still.”

One of the captive skin-spies convulsed against its chains, vomited threads of spittle into the pit below. “I see. And this is why I am to die?”

Kellhus looked to the haloes about his hands. “The crimes you’ve committed, Father … the sins … When you learn of the damnation that awaits you, when you come to believe, you will be no different from the Inchoroi. As Dûnyain, you will be compelled to master the consequences of your wickedness. Like the Consult, you will come to see tyranny in what is holy … And you will war as they war.”

It seems that the Thousandfold Thought ultimately drives the Dunyain into the arms of the Consult. Whether that means that they are evil is a different question, and depends on our interpretation of evil. Evil in the Earwa-universe frame, or evil in our moral universe. I think closing the world to the outside sounds like a laudable goal, although the primary proponents of that solution seem reprehensible.

This does suggest that my pet theory, that Kellhus pursues the same aims as the consult, may be incorrect. Although, if Mimara correctly perceives him as damned, and he knows that he is damned, that may change his point of view from first-trilogy Kellhus.

Also, interesting that Kellhus points to his father's crimes, sins, and wickedness when Kellhus engaged in similar exploits in his journey to meet his father.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Wilshire on June 10, 2016, 03:17:11 pm
I disagree with your conclusion.

"as Dunyain, you will be compelled to master the consequences of your wickedness..."

To me, the implication is simply dominance over circumstance. The end might be the same, some machination designed to kill or shut out the gods, but in my mind, this would necessarily mean the destruction of the Consult as well. A Dunyain wouldn't suffer them to live. They hold too much power and mystery, and are probably indomitable in the timeframe of a single human lifetime.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: CFKane on June 10, 2016, 04:19:53 pm
I disagree with your conclusion.

"as Dunyain, you will be compelled to master the consequences of your wickedness..."

To me, the implication is simply dominance over circumstance. The end might be the same, some machination designed to kill or shut out the gods, but in my mind, this would necessarily mean the destruction of the Consult as well. A Dunyain wouldn't suffer them to live. They hold too much power and mystery, and are probably indomitable in the timeframe of a single human lifetime.

Poorly chosen words on my part, I suppose. Given what we know of the Dunyain, they would almost certainly attempt to control or destroy the consult (as they did the Holy War in the first series). I'm not sure that the distinction really matters, however, if they reach the same conclusion about how to close the world to the outside. If the Dunyain do not join and seize control of the Consult, they would likely just create a new, more effective version of the Consult in its place. Assuming there is no creative new way to close the world to the outside.

Also, if you are the Dunyain, why settle for a single human lifetime when you can use the creepy Shaeönanra approach?
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on June 14, 2016, 12:28:32 am
It appears that I am Will Smith from I Am Legend and this place is New York, the only action is on the arc giveaway thread.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: themerchant on June 14, 2016, 05:42:47 am
A lot of the regulars have read the ARC, and are discussing it in their secret forum, may the scripture that comes remember them as "Shikol's thigh boners"

There is like 3 of us who have abstained so you're left with our shitty chat till TGO comes out :)
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Ciogli on June 14, 2016, 05:59:21 am
Well I shall pray to Ajokli that I might smite mine enemies, to hell with them and their secret forum. I don't think their that cool anyway, I didn't really want talk about the book.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Madness on June 14, 2016, 01:45:14 pm
It appears that I am Will Smith from I Am Legend and this place is New York, the only action is on the arc giveaway thread.

A lot of the regulars have read the ARC, and are discussing it in their secret forum, may the scripture that comes remember them as "Shikol's thigh boners"

There is like 3 of us who have abstained so you're left with our shitty chat till TGO comes out :)

Well I shall pray to Ajokli that I might smite mine enemies, to hell with them and their secret forum. I don't think their that cool anyway, I didn't really want talk about the book.

Lmao. I'm sorry, Ciogli. After the Quorum excerpt spoilers and the realization that a number of people were going to have read an ARC while some people clearly didn't want to read the excerpts, they needed their own fastness for the greater good.

There are - I don't know - fifty new members with accounts who didn't have them a week ago :). Not to mention the couple hundred here already.

You outnumber ARC readers like six to one.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Walter on June 15, 2016, 06:11:49 pm
I ebayed an ARC and have read it!  Please uplift me to the secret forum!
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: MSJ on June 15, 2016, 08:11:20 pm
@Walter, message Madness or Wilshire. Also, beg....beg as you have never begged before. ;)
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: generic on June 19, 2016, 10:07:26 am

I have to say though, I've seen a detail mentioned before that is becoming more and more salient to me: if there are so many Sranc in the North, so many that between the Dunyain, the scalpers, the Great Ordeal, there's still an incomprehensibly vast amount of them... By all rights the Sranc should have eradicated mankind a long, long time ago. If there's an entire subspecies of them dedicated to leading their roving bands, if the Erratics under the Consult have mustered a great many of them as an army, then even despite the No-God's absence I just can't think of why they've taken so long to reduce the population to 144k. The Consult have had this one in the bag for the last couple of centuries at least, why on Earwa have they been waiting for mankind to muster its forces and cut their way into Mordor?

Both the ten yoke legion and the force exterminating Ishual were led by Nonmen. Nonmen are irreplaceable and there is a lot of ground to cover.

Also after this chapter it finally clicked for me. The Dunyani are an ancient plot by the Nonmen kings, Mek in particular. Seswatha is/was also into it. Its the perfect conspiracy because no one remembers it. Why was Mek there in the prologue? So he could get the new Dunyani and transport him south. Just as he did with Moe. And maybe the Latter Prophet? That would make the Trapper the one who derailed everything.
Why does Seswatha have to be involved? Because he knew where Ishual was, Mek didn't. When did he join? At the walls of Daghlish(sp). It wasn't a place he should have been able to escape from under his own power.
This explains several things:
The Dunyani extinguishing magic and history. Otherwise they would be unmanageable. No matter how smart you are, you won't catch on to magic spies if you never consider the possibility.
Cleric sounding like Khellus.

No idea what the purpose is, but the idea of Mek burning down cities in particular patterns just so he can remember his part of the plot has a lot of appeal. I propose that he staked the population of Daghlish to the wall as a giant screaming post it note.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: The Sharmat on June 21, 2016, 05:47:54 pm
Just finally succumbed to reading these excerpts. I'm actually not a fan of the whale-mothers right now. The rate at which the Dunyain were speciating was already stretching my suspension of disbelief, and it's quite strained now. I mean, I'd accept the whale-mothers. Human version of naked mole rat queens, basically. But the whale-mothers AND the awesome face reading AND the incredible intellect AND the probability trance AND the super speed AND the super reflexes AND the super strength AND the iron-bones? Two millenia of selective breeding can only do so much. Plus, while horrifying...feels like beating a dead horse at this point to be honest. Women suffering while being used by men? You don't say? I mean it's not a deal breaker for me but I think there were better ways to go with it. Also kind of weird that the whale-mothers didn't have a bit more of the Dunyain traits in their neurology, too. I mean the vast majority of their genome is shared with male specimens of Homo dunyaini.

Though with the way Kellhus describes the breeding process, combined with the whole story about the mating narwhales, makes me hold out a glimmer of hope that perhaps this only happens to Dunyain women when they're impregnated, and otherwise, they resemble their male counterparts more.

I'll post my other thoughts when I've ordered them better and seen what else has already been discussed. (I'm already itching to decry the "Kellhus is clearly the Dunyain's chosen one!" narrative...  :P )

EDIT: Possibly a bit of a clue to the internal make-up of the Consult, here. When the kid first said "Singers" I thought Mangaecca, not Erratics, for a mission of such importance. But it was apparently (in particular given how easily they got lost) at least primarily Erratics. What happened to the Mangaecca? Do they still exist in any numbers? Are they simply too precious to risk, or are they primarily extinct?

EDIT 2: I know it's been said, but "We have to find her (mother)! We have to warn her!". Very powerful moment. Someone she hates/loves so much. Kind of like Cnaiur having to continually quash the urge to call out to the Inrithi in warning. Dunyain are so inhuman and terrible that even a Scylvendi and a Nansur can find common ground.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: The Sharmat on June 21, 2016, 06:40:22 pm
Hm. I think I get it now. Salvation and damnation are identical. Not just in the Outside, but in the real world. Dunyain or the God vs. the Consult? What's the difference? They both hollow people out and turn them into instruments of their own uses. Shaeonanra's hosts and the whale-mothers. A lot more to compare there than to contrast.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: Doubt on June 23, 2016, 03:26:39 am
Hm. I think I get it now. Salvation and damnation are identical. Not just in the Outside, but in the real world. Dunyain or the God vs. the Consult? What's the difference? They both hollow people out and turn them into instruments of their own uses. Shaeonanra's hosts and the whale-mothers. A lot more to compare there than to contrast.
Sorry? Unless I misunderstand you, you're saying Kellhus is good? The Dunyain are damned t'fuck. Kellhus is described as doom incarnate. Them and the Consult aren't opposite sides of the good evil spectrum. They're both definitely on the "evil" side.
Title: Re: [TGO SPOILERS] First complete chapter with Akka and Mimara
Post by: The Sharmat on June 23, 2016, 02:37:47 pm
That was my point, actually. They're both horrible.